Saturday, December 4, 2010

THIS is good poetry

my roommate wrote this and I think it is incredible


The night is upon the oceans shore

It’s just the dark our hearts adore

The pain from past, is like a rush so swift

It’s just the present our souls do miss

The thoughtless motion of the tides slow turns

Yearns for what our heart adorns

All sound is but a coffins silence

To drench the sky in moonlight distance

Its but the path of least resistance

To promise pain to mans existence.

2 comments:

  1. the light of star by longfellow

    a psalm of life by longfellow

    GREAT POEMS

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  2. if he'd like to join that'd probably be fine with the others

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